WHAT MAKES LILLY LONG MYSTERIES UNIQUE? by Penny Shane Richards

Nothing New

When I first decided to switch from contemporary romance to historical mystery I thought of a heroine who was an actress who becomes a Pinkerton agent. It made sense to me, since she would be good at infiltrating different situations and get right in the middle of things. The idea seemed so fresh and I still believe it is, but I was surprised when I started my research and discovered that Allan Pinkerton hired the first female detective, the incomparable Kate Warne, and that he hired several actresses through the years.

So, what makes Lilly a different from other historical mystery heroines out there? First, she’s young. Twenty-two. And she’s a walking dichotomy; not so much a rebel as just trying to figure out who she is. When I researched the theater, I learned a lot about the life of women who “tread the boards.” Raised in an industry where women were considered little more than harlots by the public they entertained, they were also some of the few women who were treated as equals to their male counterparts, and were paid accordingly. Though it was a life of travel and different places, the nomadic life of a traveling theater actor was, in many ways sheltered, since they were never in one place long enough to put down roots, or make lasting friends outside their fellow players.

Like many heroines, Lilly is headstrong. Unlike many, that determination stems from a natural curiosity, and eagerness to try the next thing, and determination not to let her shortcomings lead her to failure.

Lilly’s Background

I’m a firm believer in strong backstory. We are the sum total of the events and people of our past have made us. Lilly is no different. When she hears her mother being killed by a lover, she is so traumatized she blots the memory from her mind. That isn’t the only scar left by the mother she loved so deeply. All Lilly’s life, Kate Long had a parade of men waltzing through her bedroom. Lilly doesn’t even know who her father is, but she hopes it is the man who took her under his wing when her mother was killed.

Sir Pierce Wainwright gives Lilly something few girls of her time had: an education equal to that of a noble-born son. This puts her in good standing when she interviews for the Pinkertons.

Fearing that she will turn out like her mother, Lilly has always down-played her looks and keeps herself pure until she marries. Four short months after the wedding, her husband attacks her, demeans her, and steals her life savings. It seems she does have her mother’s penchant for falling for handsome, smooth-talking men, after all. How do these old scars and new wounds affect her?

Trials Turn to Motivation

Furious that she was so easily swayed by pretty words and that she and other women are such easy prey for men, she wants to change things. Now she is determined to become a Pinkerton. She can’t help every abused woman, but she can help a few.

Too young, too innocent, unskilled, she gets the job anyway, but only by hook or crook, her intelligence, and what she knows about Allan Pinkerton, whose motto is “the ends justify the means.”

So, we have our heroine, who had a far different background than most heroines in the 1880s:

Like most young ladies of her time, she is unskilled and green as grass, BUT She is well-educated.

She is naïve and doesn’t think things through, BUT she is determined and hardheaded.

Kate’s blood does run through her veins, BUT thanks to Pierce, she has morals and values to act as a balance.

Like other women, she is dependent on men to help her achieve her goals, BUT her anger and frustration over the state of women, keep her pushing for more.

For every negative, I’ve given her a positive. Led by determination and curiosity, Lilly rushes headlong into trouble and often does stupid things. But given her personality and her unique past, she learns with every case, stumbling onto clues as much as discovering them, but always falling back on the traits that made her the woman she is.

Penny Richards has been publishing since 1983 with just over 40 books to her credit. Mostly contemporary romance, her books have won several industry awards, including a Romantic Times Lifetime Achievement Award and a RITA nomination, and have made many best seller lists. She currently writes the Lilly Long Mystery series for Kensington. Lilly is a Shakespearean actress who becomes a Pinkerton agent to help women who have been taken advantage of by unscrupulous men. The first book in the series, AN UNTIMELT FROST was awarded Best Historical Mystery of 2018 from the Texas Association of Authors. The third book, MURDER WILL SPEAK, takes Lilly to the infamous portion of Ft. Worth known as Hell’s Half Acre. MURDER WILL SPEAK is scheduled for release in April of 2018.

Website: http://www.pennyrichardswrites.com

Twitter: @pennyRwrites

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Spotlight on Honey Baked Homicide by Gayle Leesom

The owner of a delightful Southern café tastes the sharp sting of suspicion in this delectable comfort food mystery . . .
 
It’s fall in Winter Garden, Virginia, and business at Amy Flowers’ Down South Café has never been better. So when struggling beekeeper Stuart Landon asks Amy to sell some of his honey, she’s happy to help. The jars of honey are a sweet success, but their partnership is cut short when Amy discovers Landon’s body outside the café early one morning.
 
As Amy tries to figure out who could possibly have wanted to harm the unassuming beekeeper, she discovers an ever-expanding list of suspects—and they’re all buzzing mad. She’ll have to use all of her skills—and her Southern charm—to find her way out of this sticky situation…

Excerpt from HONEY-BAKED HOMICIDE by Gayle Leeson

 

We were on our way back home when we saw an old pickup truck speeding in the direction of Landon’s Farm. In fact, it appeared to be Mr. Landon’s truck, but neither Ryan nor I could see well enough in the dark to determine if it was.

Ryan drove until there was a wide enough space on the shoulder of the road to pull over. Then he took out his cell phone and called the police station.

“Hi, it’s Ryan. I’m out on Route 11 just outside of Winter Garden. What appeared to be an antique Chevy truck just passed me going in the opposite direction. The vehicle is speeding, and I’d like for you to alert the officer on call—maybe contact the county dispatch as well.”

He ended the call and placed the phone back in the car’s center console.

“I’d hate for Mr. Landon to get a speeding ticket,” I said.

“We’re not sure that was Mr. Landon . . . or even if that was his truck. If it was, whoever was driving it took the expression drive it like you stole it to heart and deserves a ticket.”

“I hadn’t thought of that—that it could be his truck but not him driving. Maybe someone did steal Mr. Landon’s truck. How awful.”

Ryan picked up my hand and kissed it. “We don’t know anything for sure right now. Given what we know about Mr. Landon, I doubt that was him or his truck.”

“But we don’t know for sure. There could be something wrong. Let’s turn around and drive out to Mr. Landon’s place to see if we can help.”

“We can’t. I’m off duty, and we’ve already sent help his way. If anything’s wrong, the police will get Mr. Landon the help he needs.”

“I hope so,” I said. “I’ve got a really bad feeling about this. I can’t imagine Mr. Landon ever speeding down the road like that.”

“Would it make you feel better to call the man?”

“No. He might think I was crazy to call him at this time of night to ask him if he was speeding down the road. And like you said, it probably wasn’t him . . . or his truck.”

When I arrived at the café the next morning, I was surprised to see Stu Landon’s truck haphazardly parked at the far right corner of the lot. I took my usual spot in the parking space farthest away from the front door to the left of the building. Gathering my keys and purse and stepping out of the car, I could see Mr. Landon sitting in the driver’s seat of his truck. I gave him a smile and a wave, wishing he’d have let me know he’d planned on being here this early so I wouldn’t have kept him waiting.

He didn’t wave back, and I wondered if he was angry. Or maybe he hadn’t seen me. Then again, he could simply be preoccupied.

I unlocked the door, put my purse under the counter, and waited for Mr. Landon to bring in the honey I’d requested yesterday. When he hadn’t come inside after a couple of minutes, I went to check on him. Maybe he really hadn’t seen me arrive . . . or noticed my car in the parking lot. Unlikely, but I guess it was possible.

I walked over to Mr. Landon’s truck. No wonder he hadn’t seen me. His straw hat had slid down over his eyes. Had he been waiting on me for so long he’d fallen asleep?

I rapped my knuckles lightly on the window. “Mr. Landon?”

When he didn’t respond, I knocked a little harder. Still, no response. I was getting concerned. What if Mr. Landon had suffered a stroke or something?

I heard a car pull into the lot. I glanced over my shoulder and was glad to see Luis parking beside my Beetle. Luis was our busboy and dishwasher. He could help me get Mr. Landon out of the truck and inside the café if need be.

After knocking on the window again and still getting no response from Mr. Landon, I carefully opened the door of the truck. Mr. Landon began sliding out onto the pavement. Was that blood on his shirt?

“Luis! Can you help me?”

I heard Luis’s feet pounding the pavement as he ran to us. “What’s going on?” He gasped. “Amy, he’s bleeding.”

“I see that. And right now, he’s falling out of the truck. Could you help me get him?”

“I don’t think we should. Let’s put him back inside the truck and call for help.” He stepped between the door and Mr. Landon and gently pushed the man toward the passenger side of the truck.

Mr. Landon fell over and I could see that his throat had been cut. I was barely aware that I was screaming until I felt Luis’s hands on my shoulders.

“I don’t think there’s anything we can do for him,” he said. “Let’s get you inside.”

“No. No, we have to stay with him. We have to wait here until help comes.”

I heard Luis talking, but it wasn’t to me. He’d called 9-1-1.

“Thank you,” I said as he returned his phone to his pocket.

“You shouldn’t be looking at this.” He gently turned me away from Mr. Landon’s truck. “The man is dead.”

We walked a few feet away from the truck.

“You’re shaking,” he said. “You need to sit down.”

He needed to sit as badly as I did. Still, I wasn’t about to leave Mr. Landon until after the paramedics arrived.

“I’m fine,” I told him, knowing fully well that neither of us was fine.

I was relieved when I heard sirens approaching. Poor Mr. Landon was almost out of my incapable care.

Gayle Leeson is a pseudonym for Gayle Trent. I also write as Amanda Lee. As Gayle Trent, I write the Daphne Martin Cake Mystery series and the Myrtle Crumb Mystery series. As Amanda Lee, I write the Embroidery Mystery series.

 

I live in Virginia with my family, which includes her own “Angus” who is not an Irish wolfhound but a Great Pyrenees who provides plenty of inspiration for the character of Mr. O’Ruff. I’m having a blast writing this new series!

Updating an Older Manuscript By Karen McCullough

For the last few years, I’ve been working on getting rights back to most of my older published novels.  In some cases, this has been relatively simple. I had an agent for a while who did a good job of getting an excellent reversion clause written into my contracts. Once the books were out of print for five years, I could demand the rights back.

 

I’ve self-published several of those older books as ebooks. I’m not making huge profits on them, but since they’ve been out of print for ages, anything I make at this point is gravy. And I have had a few people ask how they could get my older works.

 

I re-edit all of them and even rewrite some before I release them to the public again. Some of the books can go with just minimal updating, but with others, I’m faced with a dilemma.

 

Several of those books were written and published in the 1990s and early 2000s. It’s astonishing to read back through those books and realize how much technology has changed in such a short time.

 

I debated whether to release them as they were, with just the usual rewrites or to update them. They’re in a gray zone timewise – the setting isn’t long ago, so they don’t really work as historical, but they don’t sound contemporary now either.

 

A couple of them worked with the addition of some technology that didn’t require significant changes in the plot. But, in some cases, newer technology wrought major changes in the plot. One of my early suspense novels had a computer programmer for a heroine. Computer technology has changed so much I had to completely rewrite that story before I released Programmed for Danger.

 

In another of my early romantic suspense novels, my heroine had to go to a library to do research she would now be able to do much more efficiently on her laptop using Google. That was a change that wouldn’t affect the plot itself too much. But when she was being chased by the bad guys, it could have made a huge difference if she’d had a cell phone. I finessed that by having the heroine lose her purse along the way in A Question of Fire.

 

My most recent release, Hunter’s Quest, was in a similar position. It’s never been published, but it’s been sitting on my hard drive for almost twenty years.  It was written for a specific publisher and line, but it didn’t make the final cut, so I moved on to other projects and forgot about it. I found it again last year while cleaning out older files. I re-read it and decided I still liked the story. Since I’d started publishing some of my older stories on my own I thought it worthy of releasing.

 

But first, it needed some rewriting and updating. Adding cell phones into the story was necessary but proved to be relatively easy. The setting in the Blue Ridge Mountains of North Carolina helped because there are still places there that have no service. (Verified by personal experience!) When using a phone would’ve made things too easy for my protagonists, I gave them no bars. I added in a laptop that isn’t actually needed very much.

 

Where I almost tripped up was in smaller things. Fortunately, I hired a sharp-eyed editor go over it. She pointed out a couple of things I read right over. Things that were normal at the time but aren’t now.

 

In one scene the hero consults a map for directions—a paper map. My editor noted that these days most people use GPS, either on the dashboard or a smart phone. I should know this. I haven’t consulted a paper map in years.

 

And then there was the car that had a bench seat in the front. Er, no. Following her instinct, the editor checked. The last sedan with a bench seat was made in 2014. Only a few SUVs and pickup trucks still have one.

 

And this is why I hire an editor. I should’ve picked up on those things myself, but I didn’t. And now I wonder what else we might have both missed? I hope readers will let me know if they find anything like that. I include my email address right at the front of the book for that purpose.

 

Blurb for Hunter’s Quest

 

Kristie Sandford’s vacation is interrupted when a man jumps out in front of her car. She avoids hitting him, but when she stops to see if he’s hurt, he demands she help him escape from the people chasing him. Kristie has an odd “gift” – she occasionally gets warning messages, and she gets one saying he needs her help or he’ll die. Jason Hunter is an NC SBI (North Carolina State Bureau of Investigation) agent working on his own time searching for a friend, an investigative reporter who disappeared while tracking down rumors of corruption in the bureaucracy of a small mountain town. Jason is grateful to Kristie for rescuing him, but dubious when she insists she has to continue helping him. Kristie is attracted to Jason, but the edge of danger she senses in him reminds her too much of the abusive family she escaped as soon as she could.

Still, the message said he’d die if she didn’t help him, and the messages have been right before.

 

 

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Karen McCullough is the author of more than a dozen published novels in the mystery, romantic suspense, and fantasy genres and has won numerous awards, including an Eppie Award for fantasy. She’s also been a four-time Eppie finalist, and a finalist in the Prism, Dream Realm, Rising Star, Lories, Scarlett Letter, and Vixen Awards contests. Her short fiction has appeared in several anthologies and numerous small press publications in the fantasy, science fiction, and romance genres. She has three children, three grandchildren and lives in Greensboro, NC, with her husband of many years.

 

Author’s links:

Website: http://www.kmccullough.com

Blog: http://www.kmccullough.com/kblog

Facebook: https://www.facebook.com/KarenMcCulloughAuthor

Twitter: https://twitter.com/kgmccullough

What’s Past is Prologue By Martha Reed

Nantucket Mystery author Martha ReedThere comes a day for every artist when she must face a fresh canvas, or, for a writer, a blank page. I’ve learned not to fear that great wide emptiness, but to embrace it, and to jump right in. When I first started writing, I worried obsessively that I would run out of fresh ideas, or get things wrong. Now I’ve learned to trust the process. If I’m willing to put in the proper amount of time, strange and wondrous things will be revealed.

 

This year, I decided to start writing an entirely new mystery series set in New Orleans. Why NOLA? That one’s big and easy (pun intended). When I attended Bouchercon 2016, I had a new female protagonist already in mind. I began to noodle around with the idea for the new series in the hotel bar, and I needed to find a stunningly good setting. Before that trip, I had been thinking about using Vegas, but after the spooky midnight vampire tour through the damp and puddly French Quarter, NOLA stole my heart.

 

They always tell you to ‘write what you know.’ I have reached a grand maturity, and I am now ‘a woman of a certain age.’ I attended a recent workshop, and I was reminded to consider my audience as I write. That suggestion struck a magical spark. My readers are all ‘of a certain age,’ and we have our scars (and our bad knees and hips) to prove it. But we also have a deep well of crystal clear memories from the 60’s, 70’s, and 80’s that we wouldn’t trade for all the tea in China. That landscape is my private gold mine. I don’t need a metal detector to know where those 24K nuggets are hidden. Who needs historical research? I don’t. I lived it, and so have my readers.

 

What comes next? My new protagonist Jane is only 31. I needed to freshen up my youthful hipster vocabulary for her to sound current. That mostly entails me lurking around my day job marketing department and listening to ‘the kids’ gossiping in Starbucks to pick up the latest slang terms, catchphrases, and trends.

 

One of my secondary characters is an aging, reclusive rock star. Kenny Pascoe is more to my speed, and researching him gives me the license to attend anniversary rock tour concerts and to watch vintage YouTube videos of The Rolling Stones, Jefferson Starship, and Stevie Nicks. And then there are the stunning research surprises that I’ve turned up that I never knew before. I’ve discovered the story of backup singer Merry Clifton, who hit such incandescent high notes on Gimme Shelter that she suffered a miscarriage. Yes, it’s a tragedy, but it’s human and true, and that’s what great fiction is really about.

 

Starting a new series also gives me an excuse to travel to new locations, and to fearlessly ask impertinent questions. I’m amazed to see the places I can get into or the behavior I can get away with simply by saying “I’m sorry. I need to do this. I’m a writer.” This phrase has super magical power. It is especially helpful when you are traveling with a companion or some family or friends who will roll their eyes at the remark, cross their arms, and say: “Yes, she is. Let her go,” as they seek official pardon and/or sympathy.

 

When I think of that fearsome new blank page now, I consider it a license to thrill for both me and my readers. No, I don’t know the whole story, yet. What fun would that be, if I knew how everything ended? Starting a fresh manuscript is a gift that gives, twice. I get to enjoy the fun of exploring my brave new world with all of its surprising new characters, and its twists and its turns on my own, and then I get the pleasure of sharing it with my readers. What fun.

BIO:

Martha Reed is the author of the award-winning John and Sarah Jarad Nantucket Mystery series. In NO REST FOR THE WICKED, Book 3, Detective John Jarad investigates Nantucket’s most notorious cold-case crime, the Baby Alice Spenser kidnapping of 1921. Sarah Jarad has a slightly different focus. She’s convinced that her control freak ex-fiancée Mason is on the island, seeking revenge. NO REST FOR THE WICKED is available in trade paperback and e-book format. It is garnering 5-star reviews.

Amazon link: http://tinyurl.com/hswrwsb

Follow Martha online at reedmenow.com, on Facebook, or on Twitter @ReedMartha.

WHAT MAKES LILLY LONG MYSTERIES UNIQUE? by Penny Shane Richards

Nothing New

     When I first decided to switch from contemporary romance to historical mystery I thought of a heroine who was an actress who becomes a Pinkerton agent. It made sense to me since she would be good at infiltrating different situations and get right in the middle of things. The idea seemed so fresh and I still believe it is, but I was surprised when I started my research and discovered that Allan Pinkerton hired the first female detective, the incomparable Kate Warne and that he hired several actresses through the years.

So what makes Lilly a different from other historical mystery heroines out there? First, she’s young. Twenty-two. And she’s a walking dichotomy. When I researched the theater, I learned a lot about the life of women who “tread the boards.” Raised in an industry where women were considered little more than harlots by the public they entertained, they were also some of the few women who were treated as equals to their male counterparts and were paid accordingly. Though it was a life of travel and different places, the nomadic life of a traveling theater actor was, in many ways sheltered, since they were never in one place long enough to put down roots or make lasting friends outside their fellow players.

Like many heroines, Lilly is headstrong. Unlike many, that determination stems from a natural curiosity, and eagerness to try the next thing, and determination not to let her shortcomings lead her to failure.

Lilly’s Background

I’m a firm believer in strong backstory. We are the sum total of the events and people of our past have made us. Lilly is no different. When she hears her mother being killed by a lover, she is so traumatized she blots the memory from her mind. That isn’t the only scar left by the mother she loved so deeply. All Lilly’s life, Kate Long had a parade of men waltzing through her bedroom. Lilly doesn’t even know who her father is, even though she hopes it is the man who took her under his wing when her mother was killed.

Sir Pierce Wainwright gives Lilly something few girls of her time had: an education equal to that of a noble-born son. This puts her in good standing when she interviews for the Pinkertons.

Fearing that she will be just like her mother, Lilly has always downplayed her looks and keeps herself pure until she marries. Four short months after the wedding, he attacks her, demeans her, and steals her life savings. It seems she does have her mother’s penchant for falling for handsome, smooth-talking men, after all. How do these old scars and new wounds affect her?

Trials Turn to Motivation

Furious that she was so easily swayed by pretty words and that she and other women are such easy prey for men, she wants to change things. Now she is determined to become a Pinkerton. She can’t help every abused woman, but she can help a few.

Too young, too innocent, unskilled, she gets the job anyway, but only by hook or crook, her intelligence, and what she knows about Allan Pinkerton, whose motto is “the ends justify the means.”

So, we have our heroine, who had a far different background than most heroines in the 1880s:

Like most young ladies of her time, she is unskilled and green as grass, BUT She is well-educated.

She is naïve and doesn’t think things through, BUT she is determined and hardheaded.

Kate’s blood does run through her veins, BUT thanks to Pierce, she has morals and values to act as a balance.

Like other women, she is dependent on men to help her achieve her goals, BUT her anger and frustration over the state of women, keep her pushing for more.

For every negative, I’ve given her a positive. Led by determination and curiosity, Lilly rushes headlong into trouble and often does stupid things. But given her personality and her unique past, she learns with every case, stumbling onto clues as much as discovering them, but always falling back on the traits that made her the woman she is.

Penny Richards

 

Penny Richards has been publishing since 1983 with just over 40 books to her credit. Mostly contemporary romance, her books have won several industry awards, including a Romantic Times Lifetime Achievement Award and a RITA nomination, and have made many best seller lists. She currently writes the Lilly Long Mystery series for Kensington. Lilly is a Shakespearean actress who becomes a Pinkerton agent to help women who have been taken advantage of by unscrupulous men. The first book in the series, AN UNTIMELY FROST was awarded Best Historical Mystery of 2018 from the Texas Association of Authors. The third book, MURDER WILL SPEAK, takes Lilly to the infamous portion of Ft. Worth known as Hell’s Half Acre. MURDER WILL SPEAK is scheduled for release in April of 2018.

Website: http://www.pennyrichardswrites.com

Twitter: @pennyRwrites

FB: Penny Richards, Author and Lilly Long

THOUGHTS ON A NOVEL-IN-PROGRESS by Tom Coffey

I have a confession to make: This is not the blog post I thought I was going to write.
When I agreed to do this, months ago, I thought I would have news to report about my next novel.
Well, as we head into the homestretch of 2017, my news is this: I’m still working on the book.
It wasn’t supposed to be this way. I even have a nifty pitch line for the thing — it’s a murder mystery set in two vastly different cities: the New York of the 1970s, and the New York of today.
Of course, the pitch is one thing. The writing is something entirely different.
About a year ago I sent an early version of the manuscript to a number of agents. In response, I received mostly indifference and rejections, but I did get one interesting reply. An agent with a reputable house said he liked the first half of the book, but he felt that the second half fell flat. He then recommended a change that immediately caused me to ask myself, “Why didn’t I think of that?”
I like working with people like that.
As it turns out, that one seemingly simple suggestion has led to a total reworking of the book’s second half — kind of like deciding to paint the living room walls a different color and ending up with a gut renovation. I keep working at it and thinking I’m getting close to the finish line, but then something changes and I go back and rework some other chapters and pretty soon I have the feeling that I’ve been driving all day and have traveled about a mile.
So I plug away and, despite my whining (let’s face it — this is totally a First World Problem), I believe that the manuscript is getting significantly better. Right now, my latest self-imposed deadline for the book’s completion is early next year, but I now understand why the Big Dig in Boston lasted more than a decade.
In the meantime, the agent I talked to has switched employers. I’m not sure if this is good or bad. We are connected through LinkedIn.
Nothing that has happened while I write the book, tentatively titled PUBLIC MORALS, is all that unusual for a writer who is not yet at the Grownups Table where powerhouses like James Patterson and Sue Grafton graze. In my younger days, I used to think the process would get easier once I gained more experience. I now realize that it won’t.
While I remain focused on the writing, once the book is complete I will have to consider the twin devils of Selling and Marketing. My last book, BRIGHT MORNING STAR, was published in 2015 by an independent operation. The book was a real departure for me and I was happy to get it out in any form, but the D.I.Y./entrepreneurial aspects of independent publishing are a bit daunting for somebody as Old School as myself. My first three books were handled by traditional publishers; I candidly admit that I’d like to make a little money from my efforts. My daughter starts college next year and, well, everybody knows what that means.
And yet … I’ve heard about a well-regarded independent publisher who specializes in crime and mystery novels, and I know people who are happy with that publisher, and if I’ve learned anything over the years, it’s this: I am highly unlikely to get rich from my books.
When it’s all done — and I do believe it will be done, eventually, somehow — I’ll be tempted to say something about the importance of The Process, and how The Journey is way more significant than The Destination, and talk about how much I have learned and grown and matured as An Artist.
 Actually, I don’t think I’m going to feel that way at all. I’m fifty-nine years old. How much learning and growing and maturing do I have left?
Well, that’s about it from the trenches of Novel-in-Progress Land. But I do have one final thing to add.
I intend to write a sequel.
AUTHOR BIO
Tom Coffey graduated from the Newhouse School of Public Communications at Syracuse University and attended film school at the University of Southern California. He has worked as a reporter and editor for some of the leading newspapers in the country, including The Miami Herald and Newsday. Since 1997, he has been an editor at The New York Times. Tom is also a member of Mystery Writers of America. His first novel, THE SERPENT CLUB, was published in 1999 by Pocket Books and earned a starred review from Publishers Weekly. Pocket Books published his second novel, MIAMI TWILIGHT, two years later. In 2008 Toby Press printed BLOOD ALLEY, which also earned a starred review from PW. In 2015 his latest novel, BRIGHT MORNING STAR, was published by Oak Tree Press.

The Difference Between Scripts and Novels — By Serita Stevens

Many people believe that a writer is a writer and that if you can do novels then you can write scripts, too.  Some people can, but most cannot.  Both need great stories, engaging characters and page-turning scenes, but the style, form and rules vary. The writer must understand the differences and know what you can and cannot do for books versus scripts.

 

Myth #1– Screenplays are easier to write than novels.  False.  If you are doing it right, it takes as long to develop the characters, the research and the plot and subplots with all the twists and turns required.

Myth #2 Writers of the books are paid handsomely for their rights.  Often False. (Several writers have refused to sell the rights to their books because they wanted those large amounts and the independent producers  – who you are mainly dealing with – seldom can afford this.) Many options these days, if not for free, are for the legal correctness of $1.  Even if you are given a few thousand dollars as an option, it is only against a purchase price, which may or may not be what you expect and might hamper what you receive later.

Myth #3 Hollywood is waiting for your book – False – This can be true but only if you can get the manuscript to the right people and it’s not easy to do.  They mainly want books that have been major sellers with great word of mouth and from authors that have a large social platform.  Studios these days are looking for major blockbusters and/or sequels.  Even having a top actor sign on will not guarantee a sale.

Myth #4 – Your work will be respected and you will able to make changes in the script.  You will get final approval of the story.  Usually  FALSE unless you already have a major following and have a great contract beforehand.  Even then…once you sell the rights, you are often pushed into the background.

 

Even if you do write the first (or 5th draft) of the script yourself and even if it is in the correct form, studios will want A-list writers who have sold millions for them already.  So the producer optioning your book has to hire a scriptwriter who might change your story (more than you want or like) or alter what you have written. Then they have to prepare loglines and sell it.  An option alone is not a guarantee of a sale.  Items are often optioned and then dropped several times before a final deal is made – if ever.    (I’ve experienced this many, many times.)

Obtaining the funds needed to produce the movie can be difficult especially if the story is historical or has expensive scenes as car chases, flight or sea action, battle scenes, crowd scenes, science fiction or other special effects.  Few book writers take into consideration what will sell overseas versus what sells domestically but it is the foreign market that often weighs heavy on the sale of a script.  This process can take not months but sometimes years.  Writers (myself included) get impatient even for those of us who are aware of the timeframes.

 

Things in Common

`              Both scripts and book need well-rounded characters with journeys and arcs that we want to follow. Good characterization is crucial for good structure.  The reader must care about the character and want to see/ read the rest of the story so an emotional connection is needed for the story to be successful.   Well-rounded means not all good and not all bad.  A character biography is needed for each – even the villain.

Characters should be introduced with action.   Physical description is not always necessary.

Stakes must be high.

Genre structure must be what the audience expects.  Understand the audience you are writing for.  If combining genres understand each and know which genre is primary not only for the writing but for the marketing.

Beginning must be exciting and establish the problem, hint at the stakes

Research must be authentic

Grammar and spelling must the correct at all times

Titles are crucial and must give a hint of the genre and entice the reader/viewer

Proper formatting for what you are doing is crucial for books, but especially scripts!

Be careful of overused words like shrug, looks, etc.  Write active, not passive.

Don’t talk down to your readers.

A rewrite is more than just a polish of a word here or there.  Don’t believe everything you write is gold!!  Be willing to change.

Understand how to write a synopsis /treatment.   Outlining helps for both.  Really, it does.

The first few pages are crucial – many readers, producers, editors these days do not read past page 10 and often can tell on the first page if you are a professional writer.

 

 

Things Different

Scripts                                                                                             Novels

99-110 pages As long as needed per publisher guidelines
Subtext is crucial Words can be more direct, but subtext important
One main point of view for audience to follow Can have several point of views. Even multi POV and antagonist.
Flashbacks and voice over discouraged Flashbacks can work if placed properly and limited
It’s a team sport -notes come from all. Know how to take and understand them. Notes are mainly from your agent or editor
Dialogue should be no more than five lines Dialogue can be longer but – within reason
White space is crucial White space if nice but not as necessary
Less is more – no wasted words – very succinct.  Use proper specifics but leave the stage dressing to designers How do you show things?  Can describe rooms, clothing, etc at length (to a point)  Can educate the reader but limited. More description ok including thoughts and feelings.
Simplify characters – combine them; hop over obstacles. Condense time for more suspense As many characters as needed. Time extensions ok but be clear with time shift.
Budget is important – think about scenes as locations, number of characters, car chases, use of animals, special effects. Historicals hard to sell. Can have as many special effects or sci fi as you want.  Time lapse is fine as long as well explained.
Special formatting programs like Movie Magic or Final Draft preferred. Understand script formatting Can be done on any computer program – double spaced and indented with page numbers.
Attitude of character is more important than physical appearance. Physical appearance helps but attitude and action are important here, as well.
Preferred if you are physically available for meetings but Skype can work at times. Network as much as you can – Hollywood is a relationship industry.  Join various groups – as Women In Film, Stage32, WGA, Women Helping Women, Hollywood Networking, Breaking Into Hollywood, Roadmap Writers.com You can isolate and write where ever you are.  Attending conferences and belonging to genre groups helps to meet editors, etc.
Agents don’t necessarily sell your work unless you are already a big money maker for them.  There are several sites where you can list your scripts and pitch directly to execs.  Managers more helpful to guide you. Agents do sell your work and most publishing houses will not look at material without them.  Self publishing difficult and still not regarded as professional.  Managers are not always needed.
No fancy covers or presentations Plain format preferred but you can spice up cover
No need for parentheticals usually. Actors should understand the lines through the narrative Okay to direct the character’s emotions.  Reader should experience emotions
Know the 3 (or 6) Act structure Act structure is looser in books
Have a one-two sentence log line A short pitch helps but is not as required
Read industry trades and know what is selling now. It probably won’t be popular by the time you finish your script Understand what is selling. Read Publisher’s Weekly (available on line.) Genres go in cycles

 

 

 

The author of The Ultimate Writers Workbook For Books and Scripts – Motivational Press  which is available at http://www.seritastevens.com, Amazon, Barnes and Noble and well as regular book stores, I’ve written books, scripts, adaptations in almost every genre – usually whatever my agent gets me.  I’ve taught writing at a variety of universities, colleges and conferences.   As a forensic nurse, I often help writers with their poison, medical, forensic, and investigative questions for their scenes.

My IMDB  is Serita D Stevens.   For questions, I can be reached at seritadstevens@gmail.com